VN Ren'Py Childhood Friends [v1.0 Prologue] [LokiStark]

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Lerd0

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Jul 29, 2017
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..welll......that was short as fuck for now....
...also the og "story"....gallery......was generic as fuck.....
....still good luck to the dev......
 

starkj

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With that overview, i dont even need to read the planned tags to see it's an obvious netorare where the new guy steals the girl.
 
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centaurys

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Sooo LokiStark saw dfifuw98's work, took it, turned it into a game (very likely without having even contacted dfifuw98), and didn't even credit dfifuw98 for putting in the work. Gross.
You put in the rating that Loki put the game for profit to get money, where is the patreon? because I checked the thread and there is nothing.
 
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desmosome

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If there is no patreon or monetization, we could be more lenient about this, but most people will still feel you are scum unless you ask permission from the artist.
 

loikl

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It could be an excellent netori game, it's a shame it was completely wasted.
 
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Gojii

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This screams the most copypasta/generic NTR game possible. Plus swiping someone's art to use as game assets.

Stuff like this should just get pulled. You're either doing a clever ragebait out of boredom or just wasting everyone's time. :LUL:
 

Firaxius

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I thought to say a few words about this VN, but since it an already excisting story and know how it will end I doubt i'll play it ever again, but first of first, grammar serious need some fixing, refering to a female as he or him isn't right that for a male, but refering to a female as she or her, that is correct. I'm not going further about this VN as she will eventualy betray her best friend with his other friend and I don't see he will be adding new pictures as the already excisting ones. You better find someone to make own images and clean up the story so it sound plausible english as well change the story a bit to be more unique.
 
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